Thoughts (Adverb-Free Post, Challenge of Daily Post)

When your eyes gets intertwined with mine,

It uplifts me to a celestial body, which do outshine.

The surrounding world becomes intangible,

I bear the state, of which you are accountable.

And then you command my hand and caress my lips tight,

guaranteeing me, everything’s alright.

I love you profoundly and will always do,

just mince towards me and confide “I LOVE YOU”.


One thought on “Thoughts (Adverb-Free Post, Challenge of Daily Post)

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